Opinions of piece of writing?

I like it. I think that you've caputured what it is to experience adolescence; the discontent, the struggle to be content, the desire to rebel against society and your parents rules. Whoever wrote this is a talented soul who uses an extensive vocabulary to craft the plague that plagues the mind of the generation that are subject to the teenage years. It reminds me of a T.S.Eliot style rant. The writer of this is clearly an intellect and deserves credit for this art!