What do you think to my song?

Not very unique. I'm a songwriter myself and i've learnt what makes a great song and what makes an average one. We all start off like you, experimenting with our own voice and which melody's work but if your wanting to stand out i would avoid writing about the 'gun in your right hand' and how your a 'madman' and write more about the causes. Oh, and NOMRAWR isn't very unique either. Good luck tho! Sorry if i seem harsh im only trying to help.